Monday, November 30, 2009

One Sentence Summary of Feature Story

Intramural sports’ consistent popularity at WSU is causing UREC officials to make improvements around campus like the $10.9 million Playfield Improvement Project.

Correcting Sentences

Correct the following sentences.


1. Even though the Seattle Sounders’ FC inaugural season ended Sunday with a 1-0 loss to the Houston Dynamo, the Sounders still have a lot to be proud of. (attribution?)

2. Tommy Sullivan was one of the many fans who were able to attend a game this year.

3. With improvement work in mind, Pullman residents are feeling the comfort of a clean, high-quality, diversified neighborhood more and more.

4. “People will come in and buy them by the case,” said Ryan Jones, a senior at WSU majoring in management operations and employee of Bob’s Corner Market for three years. “It’s not uncommon for them to run out at the warehouse. Sometimes I think they just can’t keep up.”

5. Yagiz started school with an undecided major, but after taking geology her sophomore year, she found what she wanted to study.

6. If enacted, the plan will positively affect the neighborhood of College Hill and the collegiate experience of WSU students, he said.

7. More than 60 percent of off-premise establishments provided at least one type of beer promotion.

8. A fleet of camouflage army cargo trucks sits in a parking lot, while men from the National Guard use forklifts to load supplies into the truck beds.

9. Potential employers are increasingly likely to view social-networking sites such as Facebook and MySpace when screening applicants for a position. (attribution?)

10. The biggest misconception out there is that setting your Facebook to private will protect you from allowing people to view your profile, Stefany Unda, career development program coordinator for CACD said.

11. He expects to see a number of transit systems turn (transit systems don't turn to voters...?) to voters in an attempt to gain more revenue, he said.

12. With more traffic on the Web site than in the department digital technology to be very organized and has allowed archives to out into the public sphere more.

13. “We just buy and sell real estate, it is what we do, but the market doesn’t dictate the price,” she said. “The price is the price and I haven’t seen a noticeable change.”

14. These bales are then sold to a processing center in Tacoma, Wash. for a mere $24.

15. “In five or ten years something else will be cool and texting while driving while be a primary offense, but it’s going to take a little time,” Tennant said.



Underline the subject and verb of the following sentences:

Another impact that increases the purchasing of alcohol is the premises that sell alcohol on and off the WSU campus.

The best advice the CACD can give is, do not post things that you would not want people to see.


Comma splice? Yes or no.

“We just buy and sell real estate, it is what we do but, the market doesn’t dictate the price,” she said.
Yes

In 2007, while the average income in Washington was $55,628 the average income for Whitman County was $36,438.
No

Going green took on new meaning this year when WSU Waste Management announced dramatic changes to the recycling program in an effort to save money across the university, The city plans to follow suit.
Yes

“Take a little out of athletics, take a percentage out of athletics, so a whole department doesn't have to be terminated,” Converse said.
Yes

Monday, November 16, 2009

Fake Press Release

For the first time, professionals will explore both commercial and citizen reporting in virtual worlds on April 6 at the Edward R. Murrow College of Communication, WSU, Pullman, Wash.

A partnership between Washington State University and the McCormick Foundation will gather leading technology executives and journalists to explore the recent rise of media outlets and distribution within 3D virtual world spaces.

"These emerging 3D spaces offer fascinating new opportunities for storytelling. And as the traditional, newspaper-based world of journalism looks for appropriate new ways to provide the vital checks and balances vital to democracy, this event will provide a very significant catalyst for innovation," Erica Austin, the interim dean of the Edward R. Murrow College of Communication said.

Virtual journalism refers to the phenomena of news reporting within a 3D online space, such as Second Life or Club Penguin.

Both Second Life founder Philip Rosedale and Club Penguin co-founder Lane Merrifield will be among the 8 presenters at the event.

ThinkBalm co-founder Erica Driver, a veteran technology analyst, will present recent research findings on "The Immersive Internet."

Also, Lila King, CNN.com senior producer, will share her experiences with bringing CNN's i-Reports citizen journalism platform to Second Life.

Bernhard Drax, an award-winning virtual world reporter and musician, will share his thoughts on the future of reporting in and around the metaverse from a blogger’s perspective.

"We're excited to bring together many of the leaders in technology and journalism to discuss and explore this new media channel for storytelling. These and other emerging forms of digital news distribution offer both promise and potential for our students and for the future of journalism," Elson S. Floyd, WSU’s president said.

Edward R. Murrow College of Communication is highly regarded nationwide by educators and professionals. It is the only program in the Northwest that offers sequences in all six communication fields.

The McCormick Foundation is one of the nation’s largest charities, with $1.2 billion in assets. It is a nonprofit organization committed to strengthening our free, democratic society by investing in children, communities and country.

"The McCormick Foundation is proud to partner with Brett Atwood and WSU's Edward R. Murrow College. Our reporting institutes are designed to be timely, engaging and insightful. This event should certainly fulfill our expectations and serve as a valuable learning platform for the participating journalists," Clark Bell, McCormick Foundation's director of the Journalism Program said.

Related Sites;
www.McCormickFoundation.org.
http://communication.wsu.edu.

For a complete schedule of events, visit the event Web site at: http://communication.wsu.edu/virtualjournalism.

Examples of virtual journalism at the following links:
* CNN IReports
* New World Notes
* Los Angeles Times Article: "Fans Flock to Disney's Club Penguin Times"

Contacts:
Brett Atwood, Edward R. Murrow College of Communication 509-335-0113, batwood@wsu.edu
Maria Ortega, WSU News Service, 509-335-7209, mortega@wsu.edu


My Questions:

How has virtual journalism impacted WSU?
How has virtual journalism impacted the McCormick Foundation?
What is the future of virtual journalism?

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Feature Story

Intramural Sports – Trend Feature Story
Kerry Gugliotto
kerbear732@yahoo.com
Headline:
WSU Intramural Leagues Remain Popular
Summary:
“Not many high school athletes have both the skills and drive to play at the college level,” Dmitry Babayev, a junior at WSU said. “Playing sports, being competitive and a part of a team was something I loved during high school, but thought I would have to do without in college.”
Almost every weekend Babayev puts on a uniform and plays on a team without the sacrifices of playing at the college level. This is his third year playing intramural sports at WSU.
“It is the best of both worlds,” he said. “I get to be competitive and play the sports I love while having time to be a normal college student.”
Babayev is among many to discover intramural sports at WSU. Each year 5,500–6,000 WSU students participate in at least one sport, and this has remained fairly consistent from year to year, said Dave Pearson an assistant director for the University Recreation Center in charge of competitive sports, special events and youth programs.
“WSU remains one of the largest intramural programs in the nation for a school this size and as of the last check, the second largest in the Pac-10 despite being one of the smaller Pac-10 schools,” said Jeff Elbracht, the associate director for the University Recreation Center. “Nearly 50 percent of students participate in some type of intramural activity while at WSU.”
“The program is run pretty well and there are always a lot of participants,” Babayev said.
The UREC’s current Playfield Improvement Project to improve the Valley Road Playfields will benefit intramural sport participants, Sarah Driscoll, a chair member of the UREC advisory board said.
The Valley Road Playfields are the second most utilized UREC facility and has 25,000 scheduled users, Elbracht said.
The new field will be made of field turf. This will allow it to be used year round as well as conserve the 13 million gallons of water and 450 gallons of fuel it takes each year to maintain the current playfields, Elbracht said. Usage of the fields is anticipated to double because of these improvements.
During the 6 months of construction, intramural participants will have fewer locations to play, and the board does not want to limit the amount of students who can participate, Driscoll said.
“Games are likely to run later into the night,” she said. “They might go as late as 1 a.m.”
The board met with WSU’s Service and Activity Fee Committee last month to discuss funding for the project.
“The Service and Activity Committee has recently pledged to support the project which will allow for the completion of the design and the solicitation of the formal bids on the construction project,” Elbracht said. “Once formal bids are received the request will be done to the Service and Activity Committee for the exact amount needed to fund the project.”
Including design, construction and equipment the most the project will cost is $10.9 million. The current economy may allow UREC to get cheaper construction bids, Elbracht said.
Student fees will not increase because of this project, Driscoll said.
Construction should start in June 2010 and the estimated completion date is December 2010, Elbracht said.


Related Sites:
http://urec.wsu.edu/facilities_playfield_layout.aspx
Contacts:
Jeff Elbracht
509-335-9668
Elbracht@wsu.edu
Dave Pearson
509-335-9660
Dmp54@wsu.edu
Dmitry Babayev
206-852-4324
Dmitry.babyev@email.wsu.edu
Sarah Driscoll
206-226-5225

Monday, November 9, 2009

Attribution?

Attribution?

Do the following need attribution?

1. Same-sex couples exist whether schools teach about them or not.
Attribute – statement makes and argument and is bias.

2. This raises the question, would universal health care work here, locally?
Who/what raises the question?

3. Although SB 5688 has been dubbed the “everything but marriage” bill, many people opposed to it feel that if it is approved by state voters and enacted into law it will eventually pave the way for gay marriage in the state of Washington.
Attribute, how many is many people?

4. “Tonight, in an historic vote, the House of Representatives passed a bill that would finally make real the promise of quality, affordable health care for the American people,” President Barack Obama said.
This is probably not from an interview with Obama, say where you got it – press release?

5. The ASWSU Senate is taking a stand against initiative 1033 with their newest resolution.
Attribute – “taking a stand” is bias

6. TAPOR is largely considered a financial disaster for Colorado and was suspended in 2005.
(Get rid of TAPOR - if it’s not a common acronym get rid of it.)
Make it more objective.

7. Many local citizens face the tough decision between buying insurance and putting food on the table.
How do we know this?

8. President Obama has received significant public attention for his health care bill, and residents of Whitman County are well aware of what his plan means.
How do we know this?

9. While the lighting initiative is important, Workman believes that not all the lighting requested may be necessary.
Who said that the initiative important?

10. Though only a few were positive H1N1 cases, the hysteria spread throughout the community and led to the large number of suspected cases.
Hysteria through community or media, and how do we know this?

Political Story - Edited

Kerry Gugliotto

Sen. Patty Murray included $1 million for transmission grid research and development at WSU in the 2010 Energy and Water Development appropriations bill.

The Senate passed the bill Oct. 15, by a vote of 80-17.

President Barack Obama is expected to sign the bill into law soon, Eli Zupnick, Murray’s deputy press secretary, said.

“Our nation’s transmission system is badly aged and vulnerable to disruptions,” Zupnick said in a press release. “WSU researchers are working to develop faster, more advanced technologies that will ensure the stability of the power grid.”

WSU’s specialty is creating computer and communication systems that allow the power grid to function in real time and increase efficiency, reliability and stability, said Anjan Bose, a co-principal investigator and Regents professor in the College of Engineering and Architecture.

The technology helps avoid and anticipate major blackouts as well as incorporating renewable sources of energy such as wind and solar, Bose said. The grant will be used to create a platform to simulate the behavior of the large grid to test the computer and control algorithms being developed for the smart grid.

“This platform should be running in about a year,” Bose said.

Other professors from the College of Engineering and Architecture - Dave Bakken, Carl Hauser and Mani Venkatasubramanian - will work with Bose as the other co-principal investigators for the transmission grid research and development.

“The success of efforts to upgrade the national electric grid to a so-called ‘smart grid’ depends heavily on the research being performed here at WSU by Dr. Anjan Bose and his team,” WSU President Elson Floyd said in a press release.

Last year, the professors received a similar grant from the U.S. Department of Energy, and with a team of graduate students, research associates and postdoctoral fellows, they started researching and developing this summer, Bose said. They are having the first of many meetings with the DOE on Monday.

WSU has also been working with local companies like Schweitzer Engineering Laboratories, Inc., and Avista Corp. on similar projects.

Improving the electric grid to smart grid technology is a national focus, and an initiative for the smart grid was included in the $819 billion stimulus package passed by the House of Representatives on Jan. 28.

Avista has paired with other regional partners, such as Battelle, and proposed implementing smart grid technology through the Pacific Northwest Smart Grid Demonstration Project. The project would make Pullman the region’s first smart grid community to be followed by the rest of the Northwest. The companies hope to get matching stimulus money from the DOE to pay for the total implementation cost of $178 million.

If approved, this would create benefits for students as well as Avista customers, Avista spokesman Hugh Imhof said.

Avista customers’ rates would remain the same, but new technologies, like a smart-meter, would allow consumers to better control and cut down their usage and essentially save them money, Imhof said.

“People don’t realize how much they can save by making a few adjustments,” he said.

WSU is one of the multiple partners that would participate in the smart grid project for Pullman, and the university already has a lot of interaction with Avista, Imhof said.

“We are very interested in electrical engineers because they are important for the future of power systems, so working with WSU is a great opportunity for both Avista and WSU students,” Imhof said.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

three questions - feature writing

Rebekah Olden
Journalsim major
20-year-old
Yakima, WA

1. Will you describe the most interesting experience that you have been through?
Honduras (10th greade) and the Domican Republic (after senior year of high school) - youth group. Build onto a school in Domican Republic. Ran activities for the local children.
Spent two weeks at each place.

2. Will you describe the types of things are you involved with that make you unique?
Member of a show chior, The Melody Lane Singers, for 11.5 years. The program is ran through the community, her parents heard about if from a family friend when she was 5. Perform songs/scenes from well known theater shows. Traveling - all through out the United States. Including Hawaii, California, Florida and New York. Sang for governor Gary Locke. Perfromed at Disney Land and Disney World.


3. What about you makes you who you are?
Really creative and imaginative. Always making up stories - really thrilled with theater because it allows me to become a character.

The experiences from traveling have made me a more outgoing person.



A creative and imaginative personality has led Rebekah Olden through experiences that make her the outgoing person she is today.

At age 5, Rebekah olden, a 20-year-old journalism major at WSU, was put into a neighborhood show choir. Her passion for music and creative personality allowed her to put herself into the characters she plays.

The success she had with her show choir, The Melody Lane Singers, lasted for eleven and a half years.

baby comma drama!

Focus on: commas

1. We looked through the church and searched outside the building.

2. These lights would be funded by ASWSU, he said.

3. His car is black, yellow and orange.

4. Gunnell said everything is still in the early stages of planning, but he hopes the project will be underway by next summer.

5. For breakfast, he had juice, bacon and ham and eggs.

6. In July the grassroots organization, Protect Marriage Washington, turned in thousands of signatures in order to stall the bill and bring the issue to a statewide vote.

7. She was tired. We stayed home.

8. “This is not a bill for gay marriage. I just want to save some money on my taxes and live my life.”

9. Elected to the council were Mark Roberts, 19, a sophomore from Miami, Fla.; Suzanne Idley, 20, a junior from Nashville, Tenn.; and Alberto Greenberg, 21, a senior from Hartford, Conn.

10. We wanted to leave to the old house, but something held us there.